How to Write a Listing Description for a Property With Unusual Features
Turn pole barns, converted churches, and geodesic domes into selling points. A practical writing guide for agents with unusual listings.
Every agent eventually gets a listing that stops them cold at the input field. A converted water tower. A property with a legal shooting range on site. An A-frame with no traditional bedroom walls. A geodesic dome. A 1920s craftsman with a commercial-grade kitchen welded into an addition that doesn't match anything else about the house. The instinct is to apologize for these features in the copy, bury them after a long list of conventional selling points, or simply omit them and hope buyers figure it out at the showing.
That instinct will cost your seller money and waste everyone's time. Unusual features are not liabilities to be managed. They are filters that help the right buyer self-select, and they are often the exact reason a specific buyer has been searching for months without finding a match. Your job is not to make an unusual property sound ordinary. Your job is to make the right buyer recognize it immediately.
Understand What the Feature Actually Means Before You Write Anything
The first mistake agents make with unusual properties is writing about the feature before they understand it. A 2,400-square-foot pole barn on a residential lot means something completely different to a hobbyist restoring vintage cars than it does to someone who operates a mobile landscaping business. A detached guest cottage with its own address and utility meters is not just a bonus room. A property zoned agricultural in a suburban county is a legal fact that shapes what a buyer can actually do with the land.
Before you write a single word of the MLS description, ask your seller three questions: Why did you buy this property? What have you used this feature for? Who else has asked about it? Their answers will tell you more about your likely buyer pool than any amount of market research. A seller who bought a property with a 40-foot indoor climbing wall because their family competes at a national level will point you directly toward the buyer who has been priced out of gym memberships and wants to train at home.
Once you understand the function of the feature, you can write about it in terms of outcome rather than novelty. Novelty wears off in the first paragraph. Outcome holds attention through the showing.
Lead With the Feature, Not Around It
The conventional MLS description structure opens with bedrooms, baths, square footage, and lot size before mentioning anything that distinguishes the property. For a standard three-bedroom colonial in a subdivision where twenty comparable homes sold last quarter, that structure works. For a property with a converted barn, a private lake, or a 1,200-square-foot workshop with three-phase power, burying the lead is a strategic error.
Buyers searching in a price range will see dozens of listings in a sitting. They are not reading carefully. They are scanning for a reason to click through or a reason to skip. If your listing opens with "This charming home offers 3 beds and 2 baths," the buyer who has been specifically looking for a property with serious shop space will scroll past before they reach paragraph three where you finally mention the 60x40 insulated shop with 220-volt service and a 14-foot overhead door.
Open with the feature that makes this property different from everything else on the market at this price. "A fully insulated 2,400-square-foot workshop with three-phase power, climate control, and a 14-foot door sits behind a 3-bedroom craftsman on 2.1 acres" tells the right buyer in the first sentence that they have found something worth looking at. Write the opening line you would say out loud if a buyer asked you what was special about this property.
Name the Buyer Without Naming Them
Fair Housing rules prohibit steering and targeting based on protected class characteristics, but they do not prohibit describing what a property can functionally accommodate. You cannot write copy that implies only certain types of people should inquire. You can write copy that describes what the property makes possible, and let buyers self-identify.
A property with a 900-square-foot attached in-law suite with a private entrance, a full kitchen, and separate utility hookups can be described in terms of what it accommodates without naming a family structure or relationship type. "A separate 900-square-foot suite with its own entrance, kitchen, and utility hookups provides space for multi-generational living, a long-term guest arrangement, or rental income potential" covers the full range of legitimate uses. If you run Montaic, the built-in Fair Housing compliance check flags language that crosses the line before the description goes live, which is worth reviewing on any listing with living arrangements that might invite careless phrasing.
The same principle applies to features like shooting ranges, animal facilities, or workshop space. Describe the specifications and the uses, not the person. "A 100-yard berm-equipped shooting range at the rear of the property meets range safety standards and includes a concrete shooting bench" is accurate, useful, and lets buyers determine their own interest.
Handle the Objection Before the Buyer Has It
Unusual features often come with legitimate buyer concerns about maintenance costs, zoning, insurance, or resale. A property with a private well and septic system, a structural steel building, or a lap pool in a northern climate will trigger practical questions that a good listing description can address directly rather than leaving to the showing.
You do not need to volunteer every piece of information in the MLS description, but addressing the most predictable concern in one sentence builds credibility and reduces friction. "The 60x40 steel building was permitted in 2019, is insured under the current homeowner policy, and has been used as a commercial woodworking shop" answers three questions a serious buyer would ask anyway. It signals that the seller is organized, the feature is legitimate, and the property has been managed responsibly.
For features with active maintenance requirements, like a pond, a greenhouse, or a geothermal system, one sentence about current condition and recent service history is more persuasive than any amount of descriptive language. "The 1.2-acre pond was aerated and stocked in spring 2024 and supports an active bass population" is more useful than "a peaceful pond graces the rear of the property."
Write the Body of the Description to Anchor the Feature in the Whole Property
Once you have led with the unusual feature and addressed the obvious questions, the rest of the description should establish that the property functions as a complete home, not a novelty with a house attached. Buyers who are drawn in by the feature still need to know that the conventional elements are solid. They need bedrooms, bathrooms, kitchen quality, storage, parking, lot size, and proximity to whatever matters in your market.
The structure that works consistently for unusual properties is: open with the distinguishing feature, spend one to two sentences on the feature's specifications and condition, transition to the main house with specific details rather than adjectives, close with lot or land information, and end with a factual statement about location. Avoid filler phrases like "this one has it all" or "you do not want to miss this one." Those phrases communicate that you ran out of specific things to say.
For the body copy, specificity always outperforms enthusiasm. "Hardwood floors throughout the main level, a renovated kitchen with quartz countertops and a 36-inch gas range, and a primary suite with a walk-in closet and double vanity" gives a buyer something to evaluate. "A gorgeous updated interior" gives them nothing. The buyer who came for the pole barn still has to sell the house to their partner, and your description needs to give that partner a reason to say yes.
Montaic handles this structure automatically for unusual properties when you input the feature list and specifications. The platform generates MLS copy, fact sheets, and social content that leads with what is different and supports it with what is solid, which cuts the time agents spend staring at a blank input field for properties that do not fit a standard template.
What to Do When the Feature Is a Problem, Not a Selling Point
Some unusual features are not advantages reframed. A property with a decommissioned underground oil tank, a home built on a non-conforming lot, or a structure with no permit history presents a different writing challenge. The answer is not to hide the issue or to lead with it in a way that destroys buyer confidence before they read the address.
For properties where the unusual element is a known complication, the description should be accurate, factual, and priced correctly. If the price reflects the condition and the complication, say what the property is without apology and let the price do its job. "A 3-bedroom farmhouse on 4.2 acres with a detached outbuilding. Sold as-is. Seller has disclosed a decommissioned underground storage tank. Inspection reports available upon request" is honest, concise, and will attract the buyer who is looking for that exact situation at the right number.
What you are trying to avoid is the listing that reads like a sales pitch for a problem property, because buyers who feel misled at the showing will not make offers, and buyers who feel informed will sometimes make strong ones. Accuracy is not the same as negativity. Write what the property is, price it correctly, and trust that the right buyer exists.
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